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[&& bby you make me melt]
just the thought of your smile
causes -cardiac a.r.r.e.s.t-
hold me a little longerrr;;
your *embrace* feels like home.
i don't think love has ever been a factor
but in you i see all i need (forever)
[you make me forget to breathe]
cheeks pink, fingers shaking
heart trying to escape(it's pounding so fast)
&& does it matter what people think?
i only wanna see you, be with you
[you make me forget to breathe]
and it's the BEST feeling in the world
once so cynical, now i'm all the cliches
but you know what? i/don't/care.
i'm putting myself out here
*prepared for heartbreak*
praying you feel this way too.
[bby you make me forget to breathe]
&& that's all i wanna feel now
--you're my addiction, sweetheart--
so. i never write love poetry! =D
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DannyG93 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
I likes =D
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foreverxnow Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008   Writer
yayay! umm..wanna help me become a better writer? like is there anything i could have done better or anything?
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DannyG93 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
Hmmm I dunno it seems pretty damn good, good message, it flows pretty well um and that's really it. lol this kinda sounds like a sog though
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